If you're reading this at LiveJournal, I'm jenniferkoliver
at Dreamwidth. Everything has been imported and moved over, and from now on I'll primarily post to my DW account with content being mirrored on LJ. I'll still answer comments and check a few communities at LJ, but it feels inevitable that gradually we'll all transition to DW. It's sad to see so many people deleting their LJs but I completely understand why. And though it's the end of an era for many, hopefully we can continue to build new memories on DW / other social sites and keep in touch with each other. :)getyourwordsout
has kicked off for 2017! I believe you can still sign up if you haven't already, but be speedy - I believe the deadline is tomorrow (15th of Jan) unless I'm mistaken. I'm already loving the posts going up at the community, the sense that people are jazzed and eager to meet each other and talk writing and creativity. This is one of the best resolutions you can make this year if you're a writer.
♫ Gods and Monsters
, by Lana Del Rey.
HAPPY NEW YEAR, EVERYONE!
I hope you all have a great New Year's Day.
2016 was a weird year for me and I know for a lot of other people. We lost loads of beloved celebrities, too. Let's not be careless and hold on to the good ones we still have. :) I'm not saying it was all bad, but I'm eager to start fresh in 2017, get back to a few things that fell by the wayside, and try some new stuff as well.
Me and The Man are having a chilled evening and day, which is just how we want it. Whatever your plans, enjoy!
In non-celebratory news, there were whispers of some recent LiveJournal shenanigans. I know this happens periodically and usually dies down after a while but just in case I've backed up my journal over on Dreamwidth here
and will mirror everything. (Posts will go up there first.) Anyway, in the event of things going kablooie that's where I'll be. ♥
I hope everyone has had / is having a wonderful holidays! Me and the man did a number of family visits this year (it's our first Christmas together) and today we have been chilling and watching movies. I just saw the 2016 live action Jungle Book
and utterly, deeply loved it.
Some might consider this jumping the gun, but I've been designing short story promotional covers for my works in progress, all in the name of building up my graphic and web design portfolio
. Aside from designing websites, the thing I love most is creating book covers. The following are for two WIPs I'm currently working on - both unpublished at the moment, but hopefully they will make an appearance at some point!
I'm now working on a cover for my YA sci-fi story The Machinists' Boy
, which was recently published at Youth Imagination
. I'll share it when it's finished.
Beachcombing is a short YA sci-fi set on a beach in the present day.
Inked is a dark fantasy, involving a girl, a wolf, and a deep, dark woods.
You can see the full-sized versions of these, plus my other graphic design work, at J. Oliver Designs
. I'm always available to do cover work for writers, agents or publishers. Drop me a line if you're interested!
♫ Two Hours of Epic Emotional, Vocal and Piano Music
by Michael Maas.
Before anything else, I have to point to GrumpySkeletor
on Twitter. This account is a parody and if you're a child of the 70s or 80s, yes, it might tarnish your nostalgia but it's so entertaining.
So Christmas is just over a week away. Where did the last two months go? So much has changed for me since the spring, and it seems to have flown... Saying that, I'm so excited about spending Christmas with my boyfriend. We met at the end of April, and became officially official at the end of July. It's been amazing. It took a long time for us to find each other, but my friends and family were right - never give up hope, there is the perfect person out there for you.
I've also rekindled my romance with writing. Looking at old stories with new, slightly older eyes is doing wonders for my creativity. I see things I didn't before, and more importantly I see things beta readers pulled up that at the time I didn't agree with. It's OK to disagree with feedback sometimes, be it in your own mind or with a critique partner, but time works wonders for perspective. I put a lot of stock in being patient and broadening the mind.
Writing feels open and fresh again, which is what I had been hoping for. And yes, it took longer to come back than I thought (or wanted), but it's one of those things. Now I can add my new experiences to it and make a different flavour.
I love this feeling. Disconnect is horrible, even when you tell yourself not to fret too much and be patient. Doubt sets in when you can't remember how it felt to be creative and you begin to think all that other stuff was a fluke. In my case, I believe personal life things bogged me down and snuffed out my creative energy. It happens. But again, I truly think that if you are a storyteller - or any kind of lover of writing - it will come back.
So I'm cannonballing towards 2017 with enthusiasm and a growing sort of joy. I hope everyone has an excellent year. :)
♫ The Dreamer
, by Anna of the North.
Up until recently I've only ever used the smaller Paperblanks notebooks, as they are a convenient shape and size for a smaller handbag, plus the designs are just gorgeous. But I just purchased my first ultra and I might be a convert. The ultra is much heavier than the mini, as you would expect, but it's surprisingly comfortable resting on my lap and obviously I can fit a lot more in it. It looks more substantial and feels more substantial, and the pocket at the back can also hold more stuff (faff like business cards, receipts, story ideas hastily scrawled on napkins, etc). Plus they are very pretty indeed.
I sent these photos of my used notebooks to some friends a while ago and thought I'd share. These are all full of stories, snippets and notes. Most of them are minis or around a similar size to the Paperblanks mini: ( Notebook porn!Collapse )
And here are my new shiny Paperblanks ultra notebooks:
Other recommended notebook makers: Peter Pauper Press
and Flame Tree
, by Patrick Watson.
Last year I posted unfavourably about the 2015 John Lewis TV ad "Man on the Moon
". I thought I'd just say that I much prefer the 2016 ad. They've pulled it back from the faux-Disney sap of 2013 and the saccharine absurdity from 2015. Putting aside badgers, foxes and squirrels trampolining together (yeah, that's right), I can at the very least believe that a derpy dog might see something fun and want in on the action. It's kind of what derpy dogs do.
Here is the ad in case you haven't seen it: Buster the Boxer
Just to note, this still doesn't top The Journey's beautiful simplicity
from 2012. That's a tall order right there. I still get a lumpy throat when I see that snowman battling the wind with such a determined face. Oh man.
♫ Let's Get Rocked
, by Def Leppard.
I have a short story out in Youth Imagination Magazine
, issue 39. It's free to read online. It's awesome to be able to post about a new publication after a long break from submitting (late last year I needed to step back from the serious bizniz of it all). I'm also thrilled that one of my stories is in such great hands!Title: The Machinists' BoyAuthor:
Jennifer K. OliverWord Count:
4,200 words. Summary:
YA science fiction horror. Two young boys crash land on a wasteland planet, only to find they are not alone.
Many moons ago I workshopped this story at two venues: Storyslingers
writing group and The OWW
. Thank you to everyone who provided critiques of earlier drafts. They were all extremely helpful.
I just wanted to wish you all a very Happy Holidays! Whatever you're up to (including if you don't celebrate anything) have a lovely week. I'm not sure if I'll have chance to post anything before New Year, so I'll also wish you a good one of those, too. :)
2015 has been interesting: full of (good) changes in my life, although what it's lacked is a considerable amount of productivity on the fiction submission front. A bad stint of Writer Self-Doubt at the end of last year kept my output low, although the story bank seems to be opening up a bit more now--just in a slightly different direction to my usual speculative fiction venues.
Regardless of new avenues, I hope to write more spec-fic in 2016 and redraft my near-future sci-fi YA novel "Hi-Res" which I still feel has a lot of potential.
There are a couple of positive potential life changes on the horizon so those will no doubt take up some of my time and energy, but I would like to post to this blog more frequently next year, and get back in touch with my wonderful friends here, on Tumblr and on Twitter.
Well, that's it for now. Have a good one!
Just in case anyone wonders what the fuss is about, the John Lewis TV adverts have become something of a staple of the British festive season and they're always a talking point.
The 2015 ad has been out a while now. I wanted to give it some time to sink in just in case I was wrong on my initial viewing and it wasn't, in fact, a nonsensical, over-sentimental pile of reindeer poo. But nah, I still feel the same. If you haven't seen it: Man on the Moon
. Seriously, where do you even begin with that?
Thing is, in the past the JL ad people have done some lovely work. My personal favourite is The Journey
from 2012. Its simplicity is what makes it so effective. There are no animation gimmicks. It has a far smaller, cosier scale and scope and is therefore far more accessible to people. The message makes sense, and the story does too. I think this is why I find it so much more powerful and beautiful than the latest one. 2013's The Bear & The Hare
had a lot of potential, but for me it leans too heavily on the Disneyesque style of animation and that familiarity takes away from its originality.
But 2015… I don't know. John Lewis haven't just smacked me over the head with the feels stick. They've rammed it right through my chest and are wiggling it about. Unfortunately, all it's doing is giving me a nasty bout of heartburn.
But hey, I'd highly recommend everybody roots for the alternative Darth Vader parody of the ad: Man on the Moon (The Dark Side Version)
. What I'd give to see this aired on TV instead. :)
- Tags:tv: random
- Music:EXO - Miracles of December
Went holidaying in Wales last week and wanted to share some photos, which I mostly took to turn into textures that can be used for graphic design (feel free to use them if you like, no permission needed).
There are a few pics of The Puzzlewood, an ancient, winding maze of tangled forest, strange rock formations and caves so otherworldly that it inspired J.R.R. Tolkien for some of the settings in The Lord of the Rings
. It's also been used in Star Wars VII
and Dr Who
, apparently! There are a few pics of castles in various states of ruin, including Raglan Castle, another place where parts of Merlin
But I didn't really go to see places where things were filmed. Mostly I just love old castles and history. And if that's your cuppa, then Wales is your place.( Gallivanting around the Forest of Dean and parts of WalesCollapse )
Back to normalcy now, and back to work, feeling tired and like I ate too much, but really looking forwards to some exciting web and graphic design projects, too, so it's not all bad!
♫ Oats in the Water
, by Ben Howard.
Since the relaunch of my web & graphic design business J. Oliver Designs
, I've been working on a couple of personal, non-profit projects so I can build a fresh portfolio with new shiny things. Two of these projects are promo posters for my short stories. I thought I'd share them here in case anyone is interested in promo material for their own stories or novels (all images are high-res and can be printed for posters, flyers, or used online).( Story promo posters for Shuffle and Death Car AlleyCollapse )
Like I said in an earlier blog, I'm really keen to make web and graphic designs for other writers and artistic types, so drop me a line if you're interested or if you want something made spiffy for promotion. These were fun to make and I'd like to make more. :)
♫ Leaving Town Blues
, by Rory Gallagher, John Cook, Rich Newman, & Spoon.
Howdy folks. I've recently relaunched my web & graphic design business so if you're looking for a spiffy website or branding to help you promote yourself or your product, check out J. Oliver Designs
On offer: websites, logos, Twitter headers and avatars, flyers, posters, business cards. All custom-made to fit your aesthetic and catch the eye of your target audience. There are a couple of examples of my work up there right now, with more to be added soon.
I'm particularly interested in designing for writers, so drop me a line at email@example.com if you're interested. :)
♫ Hopeless (SoundNet Remix)
, by Luke Cusato.
The weekend before last me and the boyfriend went to a yew tree forest for a wander. I got some great pics on my phone and thought I'd post them (don't you think they'd make good graphic textures? Haha). Weirdly, there was very little wildlife that we saw among the yews, apart from a scant few butterflies and moths. Even birds seemed sparse. It was a bit like being in a woven tree cave that the rest of the world had forgotten, cool and peaceful and safe. It was rather lovely.( Me and yew, yew and me, lots and lots, for us to seeCollapse )
Because we are derps, we got my car stuck on a narrow country track, which was fine at first, until we realised the two of us probably wouldn't be able to budge it. Thankfully some obliging cyclists came through and helped push my car to safety. These things, they make us stronger (especially when, you know, lifting cars).
The next day the bf drove us into The New Forest
for another wander. It's a different thing, the New Forest--there are creatures everywhere you turn. Ponies and cows hang out on the roadside, wander into villages and generally skulk about like delinquents. We walked down a long, narrow road to a lake, spoke to some ducks, and then veered off the path across a field of scrub towards the trees. The forest floor was riddled with crisp holly leaves, and because I was wearing impractical shoes (surprise?), I felt a lot of them. :) But the best bit was the herds of deer. One must have been ten or so strong, including a couple of gangly fawns. It was incredible how close we got considering how noisy we were (crispy holly leaf carpet, yo). Eventually they heard us and bounced away; it was so special. I've never seen that many deer together in one place before. There are lots of picturesque little pubs in the New Forest too. I was thinking that I'd love to stay there for a couple of days, go adventuring, and spend time writing and being creative. All that air and nature has got to be good for the soul pores.
Now back to civilisation, I'm cracking on with a new story that might be a novelette or might even be a novella--I don't know. It's growing itself and I have no control. But hey, it feels great to joyously throw down words like this again. :)
♫ Whispers in the Mist (feat. Aloma Steele)
, by Varien.
I'm never immediately sure when the cinematic cutscenes in The Order 1886
are finished and I'm in control of the character again. It's seamless. Visually this game is something else. (Here's the trailer
if anyone missed it. Yeah, so the gameplay looks exactly like that.) It's boggling how fast game development has progressed even just in the last few years. It makes you wonder what games will be like in five, ten years time. :O
A few acts into The Order 1886
and it's enjoyable so far. The prologue is nice, though I don't think it does the visuals as much justice as it could--the scenes are shadowy and shaky and sparse, and the real wow! doesn't happen until Act I when you've flashed back. Galahad
is a cool dude, the supporting cast seems intriguing, and the voice acting is superb. I really hope there's a lot of character development and emotional stuff to come; I feel like this game could blow the mind if the writing is as strong as the virtual world-building.
I'm a little disappointed by how linear the gameplay is, though. They show you this rich, complex and incredibly detailed labyrinth, but you can't really explore it in the way you want to. Just a little bit of freedom to wander side streets and pick up mini missions would probably make the setting more satisfying. I prefer having the option to occasionally deviate from the main story, do something else for an hour or so, and then come back to continue the main plot when I'm ready. Right now, it's very much like watching a movie, which in some ways is great, but I'm not really having to think too hard or strategise.
And on a different gaming note, Dragon Age Inquisition
. Yeah, I'm terribly late to this party, but it turned out my PC laptop was unable to run the game when it first came out. There was a lot of sadface about this because some of my friends were playing it and having a blast (gaming envy, meep). But hey, I got a PS4 recently so I'm very much back in the game!
Party set-up for my level 16 Rift Mage: Varric for ranged, poisoned weapons, and a bit of stealthy goodness; Vivienne because as a Knight-Enchanter she is developing into a freaking godly one-woman-army; Cassandra because she's not a terrible sword-and-boarder, and damnit I've grown attached to her. We make a nice little team. The other characters are nicely distinguishable from each other, but I get stuck in my ways (for example, in DA:O
it was invariably DPS!mage, Alistair, Wynne and Leliana). Initially it was tempting to go the Knight-Enchanter route, but I heard that running Viv in the party with you also as a K-E mage pretty much nerfs the game. Like, you could virtually go out with just you and Viv and take everything down. While that sounds instantly gratifying, I'm looking for a bit of a challenge, so in the end Rift Mage seemed the less easy option.( A few other things about DAICollapse )
Also played a little bit of Destiny
but that's one to be put aside for now. I can already tell that I'd get massively sucked into it and with current writing projects and general life stuff, there just aren't enough hours in the day. Sigh. :)
Also, even more sadface, a few weeks ago Cam and Seb put up their last episode of Top Five Skyrim Mods of the Week
. Gah, I'm going to miss this show so much, and honestly I'm not ready to let go. :/ But best of luck to the guys and whatever they plan to do next.
It's been a while since I've been able to share some good news here, but my short dark fantasy / horror story "Shuffle" has just been published at the wonderful Kaleidotrope
magazine in their summer 2015 issue! I am beyond thrilled. The story is available online for free here:Title:
Jennifer K. OliverWord Count:
Post-apocalyptic story about a dead thing reclaiming its life and realising perhaps death is better.
There were a lot of incredibly helpful reviews of this story on the Online Writing Workshop and from Storyslingers writing group. Thank you to those who took the time to read and comment. And as always thank you to Yvonne Anisimowicz for the multiple beta reads. :)
is back for 2015, and there's still time to sign up
! I've done this challenge a couple of years running and it's a wonderful way of keeping on top of your writing goals. The community provides a very organised, supportive structure, with loads of different writing events, encouragement posts, as well as writing articles to help inspire or motivate you. You can pledge to meet various different word counts - there is something to suit everyone.
Towards the end of last year I posted a few short interviews at other blogs and venues, and since they are writing-related I thought I'd share them here:
First up is an author profile of novelist, poet, script writer and playwright Sue Ashby
. Sue does a lot of invaluable support work and networking with writers in the South West of England.
Followed by another author profile of playwright Tony Benge
. Tony has been writing plays for twenty years, and has been commissioned by the Library Theatre Manchester, Radio 4 Drama, and Manchester Open Learning.
And lastly, The Dorset Writers' Network did a Writing Lives biography on my writing group! This is the first in a series of group bios - one will go up every month. Writing Lives: Storyslingers
♫ Skyfire (King Trimble Remix)
, by Twofold.
Happy New Year, everyone! I wish you all the good times, progress, and best wishes in the world for 2015. Let's hope it's a grand and spiffy year!
I plan to post more regularly here again, and share writing-related content as I was last year before Life got all distracting and I fell out of the LJ way. I hope everyone is doing great and had a good end to 2014.
I'll start off by mentioning The Write Day
, a one day boost-camp retreat for writers in the South-West of England. It offers a light, airy space, time to focus on nothing but writing, and support from other writers. I'm booked on for Feb 15th and will be there with a few friends from my writing group. It should be fun and extremely productive!
Usually, when a writer has finished a story or taken a story as far as they can, they send them out to critique groups or beta readers for feedback. As the author, it’s difficult disconnecting from a story’s headspace, and that makes it tricky to judge if everything is working. This is where critique groups and betas are invaluable: the fresh eye, the new perspective, the telling reactions. These all help author see where a story might still need work.
But there’s a big difference between a critique and an edit, and sometimes authors get back one when they really need the other. I’m going to talk about why, break down each one, and suggest things writers should do when approaching someone for feedback.Critique:
A critique is an evaluation. It’s a review where you look at the bigger picture and consider things like pacing, clarity, character motivation, character arcs, plot and plot holes, weak dialogue, unnecessary exposition, theme and motif. This is where you think about whether or not every chapter, every scene, every paragraph advances the plot. You ask if all the characters are pulling their weight. You ask what the writer is trying to get across. Think: bigger picture, overall story.Edit:
An edit focuses more on grammar, style, and punctuation. It picks apart paragraphs and sentences and looks for inconsistencies, repetitions, misused words, typos and spelling errors, awkward sentence structure, etc. It can expand to include suggestions on characters, dialogue, pace and plot, but these are generally smaller observations, on a paragraph by paragraph (or line by line) level. Think: details, fine tuning.
When you send stories out for feedback, be clear about the following:
1) How ‘finished’ is your story. It’s no good getting line edits on a first draft–it wastes everyone’s time. Ideally, you don’t want line edits until you’ve fixed the plot and characters. Plot and characters come first, and they should be analysed in a critique. Often revision is required, which can lead to whole chunks of a story being rewritten. How awkward when you have to explain to a beta reader who just spent two hours line editing your work that you’ve had to rewrite the entire story from scratch.
2) Be clear about what type of feedback you need. Specify the elements of a critique if your reader doesn’t know the difference. Ask questions (put them at the end of the story so as not to influence the reader before they start), and get them to write down their reactions as they read. Did their attention wander at any point, and if so, when? Were the character motivations clear and believable? Did the ending satisfy and tie in, at least a little, with the start? Was anything confusing? If the reader has never critiqued before, these questions will help guide them through it.
Writers become better writers much quicker through writing, reading, and critiquing. Editing will help teach you when to use commas instead of semi-colons, but it won’t teach you how to develop an engaging character with clear, compelling motivations, or sharpen your use of metaphor or motif, or just tell a damn good story. Semi-colons generally don’t sell fiction. Good stories do.
(Not, I want to add, that there’s anything wrong with a semi-colon! I ♥ them.)
If you’re a fiction writer, start critiquing. Do it every week. If you can’t find a fellow author to crit, then pull an anthology off a shelf and practise with that.
Here are some other excellent resources on writing critiques:How to Critique Fiction
, by Victory Crayne.Nuts and Bolts of Critiquing
, by Tina Morgan, posted at Fiction Factor.15 Questions for Your Beta Readers
, by editor and author Jodie Renner, posted at Kill Zone.(Note: This post was originally written for Storyslingers. Cross-posted here in case anyone finds it helpful.)